The Official Writing Challenge
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05/13/06
Wow, this is absolutely incredible. Great, great work.
05/13/06
Depression seems to be a common thread in this topic. Such an encoragement that this beast can and is being overcome.
05/14/06
If this is what I contend with in advanced, I am quiting while I am behind. A great peice of work here, such emotion tied up in words.. Good Job..
05/15/06
Wonderful imagery in your first attempt at poetry! Wow! Great beginning! Keep penning those lines, Deb!! Way to go!
05/15/06
This is a good job for your first poetry attempt. You drew a great word picture that is clearly understood.
05/15/06
Wonderful! Yes,in our hopeless times we turn to Him and He whispers hope to our souls.
Love your message on hope.
05/15/06
There is a lot of power and emotion in this piece. I think it can minister to others who are fighting the same lying spirits. Hope to see my poetry from you!
05/15/06
Very good. I wouldn't guess it was your first poetry attempt.
05/17/06
I agree, this was fantastic. Very well written, wonderful capturing of some very common thoughts, emotions... lies, and truths. Well done!
05/23/06
Darkness turns to light here! How apt that you set the stage for depression in the context of night ....b/c dawn will surely come. This is our hope!