The Official Writing Challenge
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This messege, story and writing are amazing. Beautiful. But, to be honest, I thought your ending wasn't a powerful as your beginning and end. You have amazing talent. Great job. Everyone can relate to this story.
05/13/06
Great personification of the guilt that we carry so unnecessarily. Like the way that you use more than one sense. A story that is, sadly, so easy for me to identify with. Yeggy

05/13/06
Super-duper! Amen and Hallelujah. This is great - the writing and the message.
This is a good perspective of the "old man". I loved it.
05/18/06
Powerful message of the guilt we carry around and how we can rid ourselves of it if we let go and let God.