The Official Writing Challenge
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This messege, story and writing are amazing. Beautiful. But, to be honest, I thought your ending wasn't a powerful as your beginning and end. You have amazing talent. Great job. Everyone can relate to this story.
Great personification of the guilt that we carry so unnecessarily. Like the way that you use more than one sense. A story that is, sadly, so easy for me to identify with. Yeggy

Super-duper! Amen and Hallelujah. This is great - the writing and the message.
This is a good perspective of the "old man". I loved it.
Powerful message of the guilt we carry around and how we can rid ourselves of it if we let go and let God.