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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Willingness (02/21/05)

TITLE: Pigs Stink
By nancy rieke


The story of the prodigal son is probably one of the most well known and beloved stories in the Bible. Found in the New Testament book of Luke, chapter 15, it tells the story of a family, a father and his two sons whoÖ well, let me tell it to you.
The younger son, letís call him Bob, decides one day that life on the farm isnít for him. Itís boring and heís bored. Heís listened to the stories of travelers passing through and heís learned that out there, beyond the crossroads of the drab little village he lives in, past his fatherís summer pasture which is the farthest heís ever been in his whole life, is excitement and adventure beyond his wildest dreams. Bob thinks about this, off and on for weeks and months and maybe years. He longs for the music he could be hearing, the laughter he should be sharing and the colors Ė oh the colors! He begins to detest his brown desert home and everyone in it. He feeds his discontent with real and imagined slights and with every passing day, the world beyond gets brighter and brighter.
One day heís had enough. ďFather,Ē he says. ďIím outa here. I canít stand it any more! Iím not cut out for farming. Iím lousy at it, and I hate it. Please, give me my inheritance now so I can get away from here. Maybe Iíll be a merchant, or a sailor, or an artist. I donít know yet, but whatever it is, when Iím all set up and successful with a big house and lots of servants, you and mom can come visit me and Iíll show you the world!Ē
The Father, although heís seen the world, says ok. He knows Bob is dissatisfied, and knows, that as much as he would like, sometimes a dad just canít fix things. So he figures out how much half of his estate is worth and gives it to the young man. Bob is thrilled and sets off dancing down the road.
In the meantime the other son, the older son, whom will call Bill, putters his days away on the farm. He finds a local girl, they get married, they have a whole passel of kidsÖ.and Bill is happy. He loves his life. He drops in on his folks every morning, usually with a giggling youngster or two hanging on his coat tails, and shares a cup of coffee while discussing the dayís work. He helps his mom fix her loom when itís broken and he makes sure his dad gets the special medicine he needs for his aching knees. His parents dote on him, and are always bragging about him, but no one minds listening because everyone in town knows Bill, and everyone thinks he is one great guy.
Well, things didnít go so well for Bob. He finds that the world out there really isnít much different that the world back home, except that no one really cares about you. You can eat, drink and be merry, but if you screw up youíll get fired and if you run out of money, lots of times you run out of friends too. Finally the only job Bob could get was Ė you guessed it Ė on a farm. He didnít get a good job on the farm either. His job was to feed the pigs. Now in Jewish society pigs were considered lowest of the low. I donít even need to know that, because I was raised on a farm. I do not like pigs. Pigs just plain stink.
So Bob looked up one day and said, ďI want to go home,Ē and so he went. You know the rest Ė the father was ecstatic, Bob was repentant, Bill was jealous. We donít know the end for sure, but I think they worked it out and all lived happily ever after.
And what does this have to do with willingness? Everything! If we are willing to trust that God loves us and accept His free gift of grace, well, as Jesus said, we can move mountains! We can climb out of our pigpen of pride and go home. We can joyfully embrace those who have deserted us. And we can leave behind the jealous, judgmental legalism that threatens to poison our joy, and live in freedom and security knowing that we donít have to watch out for ourselves or anyone else. Thatís Godís job.

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Debbie OConnor02/28/05
Fun, with a great message. I like your to-the-point style. Good job.
Rich Grabowski03/01/05
Wisdom in life is gained by seeking God when our own strength fails us. You have painted a nice picture and the conclusion was right on target. Nice job! Thanks
Jeremy McNabb03/02/05
This tale lends a modern application to a story which is two thousands years old. I enjoyed this one!
donna robinson03/03/05
I too loved the folksy approach here. I have always wondered about the good brother. But i think you are right because he was a good person. Oh, he might have been peeved for awhile, who could blame him, but in the end, I think he couldn't stop his goodness, his love for his brother was more important. Very enjoyable read!