The Official Writing Challenge
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Every word belonged. Good job!
05/12/06
Really enjoyed this, so much said in so few words. Well done! Love these lines: Tomorrow in hope fades away./Faith,/Is the anchor that holds me. They so aptly express our experience! Starts well and doesn't disappoint. Yeggy
05/13/06
I love how in the last section on mortality you tied in hope and faith, as we know mortality is an unbearable conditon without faith and hope. Nice job on the whole thing, but I particularly loved the flow and message of Mortality.

05/15/06
This poem flowed so beautifully. You expressed faith and hope with a certainty in God's redeeming love. I liked the rhythm of the poem too.