The Official Writing Challenge
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What beautiful choices of words. You set the scene so well. I wanted to hear more!
05/12/06
Poignant slice of life story that plucks at the heart strings. Too easy to get ongoing adoption issues wrong.
Yeggy
05/13/06
I love your descriptive choices. You definitely have a way with giving us a clear picture of how you see things. Nice work.

05/15/06
Very poetic. You certainly have a gift. You've conveyed so well your feelings for your gift. Thanks for sharing this little treasure.
05/15/06
You painted a beautiful picture, I wanted the story to go on. Great entry.
05/16/06
It says so much in so few words. Ditto on above as well, poetic, heartfelt piece.
A beautiful snippet of biography and relationship. Both tender and deep - !