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This is an excellent meditation. I, for one, need frequent reminders to be humble. However,your article would be even better if you would write in the 1st person and give us an example of a time when you were less than humble and how God brought you to your knees. Good job.
05/11/06
A very good message. The line of the song gives us hope, even in our humbling experience. You conveyed the idea very well in your piece.
This is a very good devotional. I usually don't read "sermons," but this was far from a sermon. You have a very engaging voice and you wrote this very well. You should try to get this published as a devotional somewhere.
05/12/06
Something we always need reminding of. A good devotional is hard to write and I appreciate you using your gift so aptly. I'm with Delores, though, first person would make it more immediate, more personal and less preachy, therefore more accessible to the reader. Yeggy

05/14/06
I appreciate this devotional that you shared. Your remind of something we all need to remember. I agree as well that first person would make it less "preachy," more personal.
Thanks for sharing.