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A very touching story. Beth is nearly there - in the congregation. The inspiration of the Preacher's words on Beth's emotional state would eventually bring her that peace that she so wants to find.
Beautiful. Written perfectly. Great job!
A heart wrenching story that brings hope to those parents whose children have 'gone astray'. The mc being outside the church is a neat twist at the end that makes the story even more poignant.
On the outside looking in. What a shame. I believe their are people inside the church who feel the same way. Was a little confused that in the beginning she felt God's presence, but in the end, hoped to some day learn about Jesus. Her hope was clear. Well written. Good job!