The Official Writing Challenge
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I love this - can see why you are a Master! Love the way he keeps saying 'you are my wife', no other explanation necessary
This was very powerful. Very, very, very powerful. Probably the best I've read yet this week! I hope this wins - Hosea and Gomer, that's what love is about!
There just aren't enough words to say how much I loved this story. A moment's reflection on how Hosea and Gomer are a picture of Christ and ME is enough to bring me to my knees. Thank you for writing this--it's in a class all by itself.
Ditto WOW! You've really brought this Old Testament relationship into the 'right here and now'! Excellent!!
Awesome! Excellent job.
This is powerful writing---no wonder you're in Masters. I may have to add you to my tracker list, to read more!
Awesome! "Loved" it!
UNREAL! Incredible, breathtaking etc...This is awesome. I love writing anything you write because quite simply, you're amazing. This stroy was so beautiful and gripping. I felt like I was right there observing the entire scene. Great job. A winner to me.
one more thing...Go Canadians!
Every time I mess up now, and wonder at His everlasting love and forgiveness...I'm gonna be hearing, "Your my wife".
I loved this so much... It was more than a story! Kate~
Excellent! What a husband! Great job.
Absolutely perfect in every way. I've been trapped in things like that and I know the fear and being trapped and the dream of salvation. You have spoken a billion truths here and I hope you know it!
I don't know that this could be any stronger. Near flawless. The characters, the story, the pacing, structure, everything. Great... a winner in my book. (Yikes, the dreaded Maxx kiss of death! Sorry!)
I agree with all the previous comments. Superb, masterful writing. Profound message of Christ's amazing love for us.
What can I say?

Move over, Francine Rivers.
Wow! This one is strong in every way. I've always been amazed by the story of Hosea and this brings it into the present. Excellent work.
Once again you pulled off a masterpiece! :)
Wow! Incredible. Congratulations on a well-deserved win!
Wow! Wonderful!