The Official Writing Challenge
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Great story. i wonder if it is fiction? Loved the first sentence. I did find the tenses/ time jumps a little confusing at times.
The ultimate sacrifice with a happy ending! Very well done!
I got a little turned around in this one ... and in level 4 that will be a problem for you. But the underlying story is very moving!
I'm so relieved to see the happy ending! Not that such stories always do end happily.

My one suggestion ... and difficult to do in 750 words ... is more atmosphere. I'd like more descriptions, so I can feel like I'm in Africa.

Fact or fiction? Either way, it is good - well done!