The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/06
Powerful writing, strong message. Thanks for sharing this.
05/05/06
A painful, but well-written glimpse of reality. Great job!
05/08/06
The smashing of the plant pots really illustrated the depth of emotions well - a good touch.
05/08/06
I really like this take on love. Very strong piece about a terrible situation. You brought the conflict and characters to life with expertise. Well done! And just maybe another winning entry!
05/09/06
Such pain and anger! You did a very good job here at expressing all of the emotions! Great definition on real love.
05/09/06
Realistic portrayal of a very difficult situation. I agree with Sandra; the emotions were 'right there'.... both Michelle's and Kevin's... Well done.
05/09/06
Excellent! The title fits perfectly. If only we could display some of this tough love when needed.
Wow! What an awesome portrayal of a real life situation so many of us parents face. Good job.
05/09/06
Queen Janet has struck again! Another perfect story from her awesome pen!

You just gotta be a pro, I know, I know, I know!!

Great story. Loved it!