Hire
Writers
Editors
Home Tour About Read What's New Help Forums Join
My Account Login
Shop
Save
Support
E
Book
Store
Learn
About
Jesus
  

Win A Publishing Package HERE            

The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge

BACK TO
CHALLENGE
MAIN

INSTRUCTIONS

how it works
submission rules
guidelines for
choosing a level

ENTRIES

submit your entry
read current entries
read past entries
challenge winners



Our Daily Devotional HERE
Place it on your site or
receive it daily by email.





TRUST JESUS TODAY

TRY THE TEST



Share
how it works   Submit

Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Love (04/27/06)

TITLE: Cause for Reflection
By Cheri Hardaway
05/02/06


 LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE
 SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT
 ADD TO MY FAVORITES

Cause for Reflection




Oh, to feel the warmth of your touch once again, to enjoy the caress of your hand as you hold me. Instead I lie here in the cold darkness of my confinement, staring at unchanging walls, wondering if I will ever again be wanted… or needed. I am old and worn next to the younger contemporaries you now employ to your satisfaction.

Once we looked forward to simple pleasures. Sharing the creamy coolness of ice cream passed many a hot summer’s evening. Cool winter nights often found us together, sipping hot, steamy soup or indulging ourselves in hearty chili. The simple act of stirring sugar into home-brewed iced tea always brought a smile. It didn’t take much to make us happy, you and me.

I do miss you.





The creative writing assignment had been to write about a spoon, long ago forgotten inside a kitchen drawer – from the perspective of the spoon! My daughter had given her paper to me for critiquing. I smiled at her creativity, thinking her writing more accurately described an intimate love relationship than the description of what a spoon might be thinking.

But her essay had given me cause for reflection about this thing called love. I thought of how people can be confused about love. Some think love means having everything their own way. If you really love me, Mom, You’ll let me – buy this dress, pierce my tongue, go to the prom… Fill in the blank with whatever works. Others think love is purely physical attraction. Still others look for warm fuzzies, understanding love to be as fickle as the whimsy of their fluctuating emotions.

Control can also be mistaken for love. Consider the overprotective parent that refuses to let his child experience life because he or she might get hurt or make poor choices. Ponder the wife who tells her husband what to do, as if she were his mother.

Authentic love, however, is different. Authentic love goes beyond the surface, beyond warm fuzzies and feel-good emotional fixes. Authentic love empowers and brings purpose to life. It causes its object to look beyond self and towards others, in order to bestow upon them what has already been bestowed upon itself.

Handing my daughter’s paper back to her, I smiled as I reflected on the one who had given me that kind of love in my life.

“Then said Jesus, ‘Father, forgive them; for they know not what they do.’” Luke 23:34 KJV


The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
Accept Jesus as Your Lord and Savior Right Now - CLICK HERE
JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and Spread the Gospel.


This article has been read 906 times
Member Comments
Member Date
Debbie OConnor05/04/06
I love the opening descriptions and the observations about love in this piece. Vivid descriptions and tight writing throughout.
Jan Ackerson 05/04/06
A great "hook," leading to a very good devotional.
Crista Darr05/05/06
That spoon has a lot to teach us about love :) This tender piece truly is a "cause for reflection." Your choice of Scripture shows incredible wisdom and leaves me searching my own heart.
Suzanne R05/08/06
I love the way you began! Good thoughts.
Maxx .05/08/06
Liked the devotional .. hope your daughter got an A+! lol! Some very profound thoughts in this piece. Made me think, and I think that's the whole purpose here. :-)
Purity Snowe05/09/06
Verywell done. So strong. Excellent
Karen Deikun05/11/06
As usual Cheri, you've hooked us with an unusual begining,and also as usual, you've shared excellent wisdom. I always come away from your articles blessed. Welcome back!

Karen Deikun