The Official Writing Challenge
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Very fast. Very poignant. I was almost there too. Why did "you" feel that way toward Him, though? Why did "you" convert?

That I care about about what "you" think as "you" hang there shows your very real skill and craftmanship.
Good job! I liked your story. I recently wrote a story about the thief on the cross called "The Promise." This one was great. Your visual descriptions were perfect. Great job.
Wow. Horrifically vivid (which is not a criticism!). I also felt it a bit sudden when he converted. How did he conclude that the man
next to him was a righteous man? GOod writing.
I like the way you wrote this, from the man's perspective. Very moving and well done.
This is so well written, Kevin! It evokes all the emotions that such a tragic and yet beautiful act of salvation should. You very effectively let us see through the 'good' theif's eyes and heart. Thank you for this touching story, and thank you for commenting on my 'soul' entry too! May God bless your ministry.