The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting take on the topic. It is true that there is only one everything else comes up short. I didn't connect well with the first person voice of the mother would of preferred the story being told from the daughter's POV but that may be just personal preference. I did however like the story line and the way you pointed to Jesus as the solution no matter how sticky of a situation.
Good story. Strong beginning. I liked the daughter's voice, but felt that maybe the turnaround in the mother was a little too quick and easy...just my thoughts.
Lots of food for thought. Heartfelt story. Good job.