The Official Writing Challenge
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I like it! A creative and effective approach to teaching the various aspects of love. A really strong opening would be to launch directly into the conversation. You effectively used the tension between characters to frame the truth about how they actually work in harmony. Nice ending, with the phrase "one-way demonstration," and saving the name 'Agape' for last!"
Oops, sorry! I guess you DID launch into the conversation from the beginning...Good! I missed it because the quotes didn't really give me a clue about who was speaking. Thanks again for a really creative teaching piece!
05/08/06
Great creative approach. Just occasionally the dialogue was, I think, a little hard to follow. But overall, a very interesting piece.