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This piece enlightens the reader to this disability and also gives hope and understanding to the ways of God through suffering. Thanks for sharing it. I'm not sure how I felt about the bold lettering, however.
Really creative opening, slowly building to the revelation that the captor is a physical disability. Your powerful imagery and metaphor describing the condition wrings my heart with compassion--I felt it could be me. Then you launch into the glorious keeping power of His love. No easy fix in this ending...only Him, and He is enough. The Father is surely smiling on this piece!
Powerful piece of writing with a great message. thank you
Great message. Thank you for giving us a little understanding of life with tinnitus.
A glimpse is all we have from your heart rendering story of suffering. But your dependance and hope we can share and relate to. I tencourages the soul to keep going.

My tinnitus is not as pronounced, but is a constant interrupter. I pray it doesn't worsen. I can't imagine ...

A powerful, encouraging piece. Thank you.

You did a gret job revealing the struggles and torment of your character. Good job.
As with so many other physical ailments, tinnitus is something others can't see and they can often forget what the person is enduring. A piece like this is a great reminder to us all to consider what others are experiencing that may not always be evident. And to see/accept God's purpose - well, that's something we can all use help with and you have reminded us of the hope we have. Thanks for this candid piece.