The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/06
I really respect the attempt to view the greatest story ever told in a unique way. It's a compliment not a knock to say I'd have liked to have seen more. The piece screams the creativity you have. It would have been even better had it been more "fleshed out"
05/07/06
Interesting, thought provoking piece, but I'm not sure I've really 'got it'. Is it someone in particular you are writing about (a famous musician I should have identified?); or an allegory; or is it for me to fill in the details? Sorry if I'm being obtuse, because I did like the story.
05/08/06
I agree with Kenny. I sense a great potential with this story an extremely unique way to look at the greatest story ever told but it needs stronger language, stronger emotion ....more.
05/08/06
Is “All Vain Things Held High” a song? If so, perhaps a line or two from it would help, as I don't get the connection. Interesting piece, though, and well-written.
05/10/06
I thought the story was beautifully told - but I didn't understand it; with other entries to read I didn't have time to re-read this one to see if I could grasp the meaning...but I'll return, as it is a gripping tale that needs to be unraveled in my mind.