The Official Writing Challenge
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I really respect the attempt to view the greatest story ever told in a unique way. It's a compliment not a knock to say I'd have liked to have seen more. The piece screams the creativity you have. It would have been even better had it been more "fleshed out"
Interesting, thought provoking piece, but I'm not sure I've really 'got it'. Is it someone in particular you are writing about (a famous musician I should have identified?); or an allegory; or is it for me to fill in the details? Sorry if I'm being obtuse, because I did like the story.
I agree with Kenny. I sense a great potential with this story an extremely unique way to look at the greatest story ever told but it needs stronger language, stronger emotion ....more.
Is “All Vain Things Held High” a song? If so, perhaps a line or two from it would help, as I don't get the connection. Interesting piece, though, and well-written.
I thought the story was beautifully told - but I didn't understand it; with other entries to read I didn't have time to re-read this one to see if I could grasp the meaning...but I'll return, as it is a gripping tale that needs to be unraveled in my mind.