The Official Writing Challenge
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Very powerful - this is love. Thanks for sharing.

God bless,

Kevin
05/07/06
Good story. left me with several questions (no bad thing) - most importantly - is it based on the truth?
05/08/06
This was a very engaging piece of writing. A couple of minor things jumped out at me: "resigned himself" and "bore" as opposed to "bared" down. But this is good stuff.
This was a great narrative. My only suggestion would be to throw in some dialog, but I still enjoyed your writing and your style.
05/10/06
War is such the exact opposite of "love" - that it is hard to find anything loving about it - BUT this writer did; a beautiful love letter in the midst of violence, war and death. Very well written and touches the heart of the Reader.
Awwwww! Come on now! The hero can't die silly! He's gotta go back for the lady!!!!

I liked this very much!! Brought tears to my eyes!