The Official Writing Challenge
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04/27/06
Love the progression of thought and development of maturity in this piece. Moving, too.
04/28/06
Very thought provoking...I loved the theme and direct way you told it. Creative!
04/29/06
I like the last one best: how tempting to listen to the world's praise, how lovely to heed God's instead. That takes inner strength!
05/01/06
Very creative take on the topic. Well done!
Good time projection, from childhood to adult. Good job.
05/01/06
What a great way to convey truth! Good job!
05/02/06
Very nicely written. I liked the progression as well.