The Official Writing Challenge
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04/27/06
Very gripping story with a surprising end. I'm glad he declared himself - even if it had meant martyrdom
04/27/06
Ooooh, this gave me chill bumps. Great story, out of the box! The God who made a donkey talk, walked on water, etc., can make us invisible when we stand in front of our enemies.
04/29/06
Wow, this is powerful!
05/04/06
good descriptions. Carried me all the way through. Nice writing!:)