The Official Writing Challenge
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04/27/06
Very funny. I loved the voice your character had. I give this one A+!
04/29/06
A wonderful rambling commentary. I loved it though I was har put to find the link to the topic. Being a teacher I appreciated the comments about dumbing down the maths exam.
04/29/06
This is hilarious! I laughed all the way through; what a wonderful job you did on this narrator's voice! It may have been weak on topic, but it's a first-rate piece of writing. Good job!
05/01/06
This was delightfully funny, but 'fess up, it had to be written by a guy, right? What makes it sound that way? The phrase "but when Lester’s wife makes his mind up, it’s pretty much set in stone." and your ending. I didn't understand one line, though: "Lester’s God-assigned name is Skinner too, but he was never really a handsome man by worldly standards."

I thought about the oldtime radio show Amos 'n' Andy when I read this piece! It was weak on topic like the others said, but would be one I could read aloud to my family.
05/01/06
This is a brilliantly fun read! It had so many lines that just made me chuckle. Loved the botched description of current events. Very enjoyable!
05/03/06
Kinda reminds me of Andy Griffith's old stories...very comical. Jack Lemmon one of the Beatles? ha ha...got to laugh.