The Official Writing Challenge
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04/27/06
A strange and eerie story. Don't exactly connect it with inner strength...but thanks for sharing.
04/27/06
Shocking... a strong message to be bold in confronting issues that trouble our consciences
04/27/06
This was intriguing, but I did not see the connection to inner strength??
04/27/06
Needs to work on punctuation and dialogue some. I felt the ending was abit shocking and could have been developed differently. You have talent that just needs some tightening up in certain areas.
04/29/06
The behaviors of your two characters don't quite ring true for me...especially the casual confession to a friend. I wonder if it'd make a stronger story if Elizabeth comes to realize what Marsha has done through observation, deduction--and then has to decide what to do about her knowledge. I think you were definitely right on topic, though--that's certainly a situation that would call for inner strength!