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A strange and eerie story. Don't exactly connect it with inner strength...but thanks for sharing.
Shocking... a strong message to be bold in confronting issues that trouble our consciences
This was intriguing, but I did not see the connection to inner strength??
Needs to work on punctuation and dialogue some. I felt the ending was abit shocking and could have been developed differently. You have talent that just needs some tightening up in certain areas.
The behaviors of your two characters don't quite ring true for me...especially the casual confession to a friend. I wonder if it'd make a stronger story if Elizabeth comes to realize what Marsha has done through observation, deduction--and then has to decide what to do about her knowledge. I think you were definitely right on topic, though--that's certainly a situation that would call for inner strength!