The Official Writing Challenge
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04/27/06
A beautifully written devotional...and very creative. Well done.
***This is a winner***
A truly remarkable well-written devotional on inner strength. Loved it immensely - and much better when it's read a couple of times!!

Very well done to the author - God bless you!
04/27/06
Rather lovely, this, especially the ending. Thank you
Beautiful. great job!
04/28/06
Wow! I love the "Please find amusement..."line. What an awesome attitude!
04/30/06
This is a wonderful prayer of supplication and devotion. Beautifully written!
04/30/06
The passion of this piece really shines through
05/03/06
I ditto the kudos listed above. A great deal of passion here and the piece is right on theme. I thought that in some places the narration seemed a bit formal, but that isn't necessarily a bad thing since we are talking cries of the spirit.... not two friends talking at Starbucks. Nicely done. :-)