The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/06
This almost reads like a fairy tale. One that takes the MC from rags to riches yet it makes the message of hope all the clearer - the direction unmistakable. Good job on this!
04/14/06
This is very tenderly written, and I especially love the 3rd-from-the-last paragraph--beautiful imagery. Watch out for apostrophe usage (marshals). Lovely story of redemption.
Well written and so hopeful! Good job!
A poignant tale of redemption.

I had to think of the Proverb - train up a child in the way he should go, and when he is old he will not depart from it. The God of her youth rescued her - hallelujah!