The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/06
This is incredible! You really got inside this character's...I was going to say "head,", but you went much deeper than that, and got into her soul. What a masterful story!
04/15/06
can you hear me clapping? This is one of the most beautiful entries I have read today. You indeed got inside the character's soul. Do i detect the beginning of a novel here?
04/15/06
Great writing and character development! Keep me reading till the end!
04/15/06
Definitely the stuff of which novels are made! Very well done.
04/17/06
Wow...awesome. The longing, the yearning...and then the ending!!!! Wow again!!