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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Fulfillment (04/06/06)

TITLE: The Purpose-Driven Dog
By Teri Wilson
04/12/06


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When my best friend Lisa announced her engagement, I did what any sensible, thirty-something single woman would do.

Did I wallow in self-pity? No.

Did I eat an entire gallon of chocolate ice cream, straight out of the carton? No. (It was strawberry.)

I went out and found a boyfriend. Not just any, old my-best-friend-is-getting-married-and-leaving-me-behind boyfriend. A real catch. He’s charming and debonair. He’s so loyal he practically hangs on my every word. Don’t even get me started on his looks – he has the most devastating eyes I’ve ever seen. Okay… he also has four legs and a tail.

That’s right. The thought of facing life alone led me straight to the local animal shelter. I knew Sam was the dog for me the moment we saw each other. It was magic. Love at first sight.

Over the past few weeks, our life together has settled into a comfortable routine. In the evenings, we enjoy leisurely walks. Friday nights, we cuddle on the sofa and watch movies. Saturdays, we go to the dog park. This is how I have come to find myself discussing my dog’s psyche with a total stranger.

“How long have you had your Ridgeback?” Stranger inquires. We’re sitting next to one another on a bench in the dog park.

“My what?”

“Your dog. He’s a Rhodesian Ridgeback, right?” Stranger responds.

Oh. I always knew Sam was exotic looking, but I never knew he was from Rhodesia. Is Rhodesia even a country?

“Three weeks,” I answer.

“He’s beautiful. Have you found a way to keep him fulfilled yet?” Stranger asks.

“Excuse me?”

“You know, an activity to fulfill his purpose. Each dog was bred for a specific role. My Collie is a herding breed. So, once a week we go upstate so he can herd sheep.”

“You drive all the way upstate every week just so your dog can chase sheep?”

“Herd, not chase. It satisfies his instincts. You should find a way to do the same for your dog or he could suffer psychologically.” Stranger calls her herding dynamo and they leave the park.

Oh, good grief.

Later, I can’t help myself. I google Rhodesian Ridgeback to discover my dog’s purpose.

Known as the “Lion Dog,” the Rhodesian Ridgeback was bred for hunting lions on the African plains…

Wow. I glance at Sam. He looks very non-threatening, snoring softly on the sofa cushions. Could this be right? I’ve never even seen him look twice at a cat. Maybe they’re just small potatoes for him. After all, he’s a lion hunter.

I decide to change Sam’s name to one more befitting the savage beast he must be. Samson is perfect. Who could be a better namesake than the Biblical strongman who tore apart a lion with his bare hands? I don’t want to give my dog an identity crisis, however, so I try to sneak in the new syllable.

“SAMson,” I call. “Let’s go find a way to fulfill your purpose.”

My newly christened dog reluctantly drags himself off the couch and we go in search of lions. As one might imagine, lions are difficult to come by in the city. We try to get a peek at one in the Central Park zoo, but the guard informs me that animals are not allowed on zoo property. Ironic, huh? So, SAMson and I head back home. It’s getting late, anyway, and Lisa’s wedding is tonight.

My lonely grandfather clock strikes two as I arrive home from Lisa’s nuptials. The day has gone from bad to worse. My dog is unfulfilled and so is my dream of having a special wedding day of my own. The bridesmaid’s bouquet falls from my hands to the floor as I give in to my tears.

SAMson licks my face and wags his entire body in an effort to comfort me, but I cannot stop sobbing. Then, he gingerly sniffs the bouquet, lifts his leg and… well, you know the rest.

Looking at my freshly “watered” flowers, I begin to giggle. The giggle turns to a laugh and soon, my tears turn to tears of joy. I have discovered my dog’s true purpose. God put Sam here to be my companion, to bring me happiness. I am not alone. If He decides to bring me a husband, great. If not, I will be okay.

“Come on, Sam,” I beckon. “Let’s watch a video while we fall asleep. Something special, just for you. How about Lion King?”

Hakuna Mattatta.


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Sharon Singley04/13/06
I absolutely LOVE your writing style! It is very charming and funny, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. Good job.
Pat Guy 04/13/06
Perfect! tehe (I'm owned by two BIG dogs!) Loved this one!
Marilyn Schnepp 04/14/06
Absolutely charming, and just a great story from beginning to end! It's so refreshing to read about a dog (a Purpose-Driven dog at that) and not the usual cat story that seems to be par for the course on these pages. Thank you for this delightfully witty, wonderfully written story that sends a great message...Definitely an A+ in my opinion.
Jan Ackerson 04/14/06
Just perfect! So witty and real. I loved every word.
Debora Dyess04/14/06
And the winner is...
SAMson!
Amy Michelle Wiley 04/14/06
This is great! Well written and fun, with a good point.
Alexandra Wilkin04/15/06
Lovely writing, lovely reading! God bless.
Alexandra Wilkin04/15/06
(And very funny title!) ;-)
Shannon Redmon04/15/06
I still have a smile on my face from reading this! You definantly have a way with taking the simple things and making them hilarious! I'm jealous...maybe I should get me a purpose driven dog! You should think about making this a book!
Lynda Schultz 04/15/06
Absolutely wonderful. If you don't win this Challenge, I'm going to have a "hissy-fit". Made my day.
Crista Darr04/15/06
What a fun read! Well-written too! Great work.
Linda Germain 04/15/06
Loved it! Very refreshing. I have a feeling there's more Master's Level competition on the way. This is GOOD STUFF. :0)
Jean Elizabeth 04/16/06
Loved this! I hung on your every word. You have great style and voice. Made me want to hug my dog!
Suzanne R04/17/06
Just beautiful! I love it!
Sue Dent04/17/06
Well, what can I add that hasn't already been said? You're SAMson's master and now you'll be in the Master level . . . at least if you keep writing stories like this. Ummm . . . I hope you got rid of that boquet! Eewwwww Great job! Fun, fun fun!
Beth Muehlhausen04/17/06
Very cute and lighthearted but meaningful...as well as a bit touching. Awww, shucks...a dog is supposed to be a man's (I mean woman's) best friend, right? Entertaining and yet deep, somehow, even though I wasn't expecting it....

Good job. :-)
Birdie Courtright04/17/06
From the titlte to the ending, this was delightful.
Lourens Oosthuizen04/18/06
Praise you! Excellent all the way! Full marks; 100%; top of the class; alpha of the pack..!
Garnet Miller 04/18/06
No worries! What a cute story. I don't have any pets myself, but I have friends who find their companionship invaluable.
Carol Shaffron04/18/06
Hilarious!!! Recently God led me to my Purpose driven dog!!! as a 54 year old "single" woman who very reluctantly let go of desire for "human" husband...I've found HIM to be more than adequate. Funny, I just read in Dog's USA 2006 Annual that very same thing! What a small, small world. Wonderfully told, delightful story--thank you profusely.
Betsy Tacchella 04/18/06
I think this is the funniest article I've read at FW to date. You deserve a win on this one. It's classic and you have such an entertaining way of telling it. You sound like a delightfully, fun person.
Debbie OConnor04/18/06
Wow! Thanks so much. Reading this fun story was a highlight of my day. No joke. I LOVE it. Your style was informal, the message was fun and you brought it home. Great title!
Sandra Petersen 04/20/06
This article is so clever! I liked the third paragraph about drowning self-pity in ice cream, SAMson's opinion of the bridesmaid's bouquet, and especially the ending, "Hakuna Mattatta." Very well written! The dog lover and owner in me enjoyed this!
Helen Paynter04/20/06
congratulations
Melanie Kerr 04/20/06
That was excellent. I thoroughly enjoyed the read.
Doug Jenkins04/20/06
Wonderfully written Teri; perhaps getting a cat would help him fulfill his purpose!

On second thought...nah.

Doug
Jessica Schmit04/21/06
When I was judging last week, I was laughing at loud while reading this entry. It's simply fabulous. The ending was terrific. I'm a huge Lion King fan! Great job. So excited you made the EC! You definately scored high points with me.
Linda Watson Owen04/23/06
Oh! What a delightful story!! Love your style...can't wait to read more of yours! I'll have to read your stories out loud to Cosmo, my 'Heinz 57'! Congratulations on EC!
Dana Cooper05/09/06
I laughed when I read this.Its a great article.Keep up the good work.


   
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