The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/06
Faith doesn't feel a body, (which this Writer writes), so could these words be about a friend, or TO a mother, or....?? I guess I'm stymied at trying to figure this one out, but it could be I'm just not tuned into the right channel. I do have one suggestion, however; it's best to start at a lower level and then work up to the higher levels as you hone your skills and absorb some good advice from co-writers. God bless.
04/14/06
This reads like the lyrics to a song...if you haven't done it yet, find someone to set it to music!
Perhaps you intended to say "fill" our body with love??

I agree that this has the feel of song lyrics!!!