The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/06
A haunting and yet beautiful reverie of thoughts. It must be read over more than once to catch the brilliance of it's meaning. Very good, very creative and brilliant.
04/14/06
Satan is not ruler here
but janitor for the hurt and anger
and broken heart of God
for which heaven cannot be home.


This is wonderful poetic language! Powerful piece, and a privilege to have read it.
very beautiful. wonderfully lyrical.
04/15/06
Extremely moving. Great writing.
04/15/06
Amen.
Layers here...deserves more than one read!!