The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/06
ahhh...good analogy!
04/13/06
love the "snow & hail" good chuckle
04/15/06
Clever analogies there - well done.
04/17/06
It turned out I was still a long way from fulfillment.

I love the wit in this line, and in several others. Devotionals are so hard to do entertainingly without sacrificing meaningfulness, and you've nailed it! Good job.

04/18/06
This is the clincher to think about: "On hold for fulfillment, I thought. How appropriate. Aren't we always waiting to be fulfilled?"

Interesting way you cut and pasted this story together!!

04/18/06
Great job. I love the message, and having just spent hours on the phone with my cable internet people only to be left unfulfilled it hit close to home. I don't think they had a fulfillment department! :)

A very creative and well written lesson.
04/19/06
What a unique and interesting comparison! As usual, you've held your reader, enlightening and entertaining all at the same time!