The Official Writing Challenge
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ahhh...good analogy!
love the "snow & hail" good chuckle
Clever analogies there - well done.
It turned out I was still a long way from fulfillment.

I love the wit in this line, and in several others. Devotionals are so hard to do entertainingly without sacrificing meaningfulness, and you've nailed it! Good job.

This is the clincher to think about: "On hold for fulfillment, I thought. How appropriate. Aren't we always waiting to be fulfilled?"

Interesting way you cut and pasted this story together!!

Great job. I love the message, and having just spent hours on the phone with my cable internet people only to be left unfulfilled it hit close to home. I don't think they had a fulfillment department! :)

A very creative and well written lesson.
What a unique and interesting comparison! As usual, you've held your reader, enlightening and entertaining all at the same time!