The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/06
As a musician, I certainly appreciated the extended metaphor.
Repetition of the drum roll punctuated your thoughts...however, after a few of them I started skimming because it lost its punch. I liked this line: "The great crescendo of desire for a Christian should be to know his Savior and to become more like Him."