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02/21/05
I love how you captured the regret that walks the same path as selfishness. Nice work!
02/22/05
Potent story-telling. Definitely gives the reader something to ponder. Thanks for being so open.
02/23/05
I have been on school buses and can picture this happening so clearly. I never got to sit on the back seat - not that I ever wanted to. As a teacher I see examples of children selfishly holding on to their "territory" all the times.
Good job! I really like the conclusion when your mc realizes what she said hurt the bully more than the slap had hurt her. And I'm glad she didn't tell. Great title, too.
It brought back some school memories and personal memories of my own! Excellent read and I wondered if you and this person ever made up? You had me caring about all the characters.
It brought back some school memories and personal memories of my own! Excellent read and I wondered if you and this person ever made up? You had me caring about all the characters.