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03/14/06
A well written story showing that we are forgiven. But there are often ongoing consequences for our sin. I loved the way he had unexpected peace at the end.
Kate~
03/15/06
Adam found peace in the end by turning to the Lord. Well written.
03/15/06
The reader would have been better served if instead of telling us what happened, the writer had given us the hows and whys inside Adam's heart and mind.

Good telling, but...dare to go deeper with this story, and don't tell us, show us, and touch us.
03/16/06
Interesting that several articles dealt with the death penalty. This one could have been better with some dialogue or Adam's 'thoughts out loud' so we could see what he saw and did. Nicely done overall.
I agree with David's comments. This was a different, well writtien read. Good job!