The Official Writing Challenge
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03/15/06
Very cute! I could feel the tensions escalate with each passing minute. Kate~
03/16/06
I'll get this out of the way first. Two typos...A "where" instead of a "were" and a "to" instead of a "the"; but the rest was priceless! Great dialogue...and so realistic! Loved it! And at the end, well...again I use the word PRICELESS! Well done.
Great job!