The Official Writing Challenge
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very interesting take on the word 'lock'.
Oooo, very clever. I think it would have been even cooler if you had not said any names, but let the reader figure it out on their own. Well done!
03/15/06
Not such a simple lock of hair after all. Good job, and in so few words too! Congratulations.
03/16/06
Where are all the Commentators? No challenge to write this week - they should be out in droves commenting on these great articles this week! This one is exceptional! Short! Great idea! Great title! So well written and my only suggestion - Footnote a Scripture from whence this was taken. Super take on Topic...and brilliantly done!
03/16/06
For a short article, this says a lot. I agree - leave out names, but add a Scripture reference. Very nicely done - it locked up my attention :)
03/16/06
Yes! Very creative take on 'Lock.' And good job of it too! Good strong entry for your first time in level 3 - really, really good!
03/16/06
I like your use of alliteration: severing and slicing, falling and floating, twisting and turning. Wish more people would pay attention to choosing just the right words!
Wow! This was fantastic!
03/17/06
Lovely writing, and because it was so short it was very tantalising. I agree - leave ou the names, tantalise us into working it out, and give a Bible ref for those who can't decode it or who want to re-read it.
03/17/06
Very creative...well done
A very good write from the first to the last word.
May God Keep Blessing You!