The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful, heart wrenching, amazing. Brought tears to my eyes. This is an incredible piece.
03/13/06
Very strong and effective. Structure and presentation could use a little more polish, but I suppose that's more a drawback of the submission process than your problem. I really appreciate what you were wrestling with in this piece. It's gritty and real and beautiful.

Thanks for posting it. It's well done.
03/16/06
Brilliant writing. I wonder who you are...?
03/20/06
A melancholy piece filled with heartfelt emotion and truth. Thank you for sharing.
This is real and beautiful.
04/25/06
Another side of you I hadn't read - but I see you can do the serious bit also. I thought it very good, and brought out the soft and sentamental side of Kenny...great job, my friend. I REALLY liked it.