The Official Writing Challenge
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03/07/06
"His five-year-old heart doesn’t understand the bad choices his dad has made."

At the end of the article, the woman is thankful for her son, and for everything else that Christ has given her, but is she thankful that God has forgiven her own sins? And will she ultimately take Christ's lead and forgive Brian's father for all of his "bad choices?"

03/09/06
I liked your idea...but I had trouble with what felt like an abrupt ending.
03/11/06
A very touching story. Thanks for sharing. I liked it very much.