The Official Writing Challenge
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03/09/06
I'm not sure I understood the connection between the library and the peace that Maria felt that was absent in the rest of the house. Perhaps a little more explanation to bridge that gap would be good. But interesting idea and well done.
03/10/06
Intresting, but a bit hard to follow and glean the meaning. Expanded a bit with explanations of how she came to find peace would have been helpful. But overall nicely done.