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This was a wonderfull delivery to the very heart of selfishness. Then ending brings vibrant focus with true conviction. Well done.
This is an excellent article reminding all who read it to check the motive behind every so-called "good work." Thank you!
The ""clang" was very effective as a way to show the spiritual and the temporal occuring together. It was very convicting to think that each sinful attitude is being paid for by Christ as long as we hold onto it.
This was hard hitting as you first want to feel good with them and then we see the more some give the more control they need over it. Well written
Sometimes even when we go in with the right attitude our selfish flesh rises to the top. This was an excellent article with the creative "clang" to remind us of our selfish desire. The end with the clang of the nails reminds us of the only One we need to please. Thank you!!
Wow! I don't know what to write.That was amazing! Your title was perfect, as well as your increbily beautiful story. great job, hope to see this in the book.
I loved the recurring click/clang theme preparing us for the end. Very well-written.