The Official Writing Challenge
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02/27/06
I loved it! Kept my interest from beginning to end. Great writing! Thanks for the encouraging thoughts.
03/02/06
You have a very pleasant, readable voice. I enjoyed reading this a great deal.
03/03/06
I think this is a winner. The writing was good, and the message was great!
You get my gold medal anyway!

03/03/06
This story helps remind the reader that when we go through troublesome times, He enters our situation and His protective love abounds. You used memories all through your life to reinforce the message that we are never alone. Great!
The girl somebody helped is you...right? I am so happy you were not hurt in your car accident. Tweak this a little and you could submit it to one of those life story magazines that publish testimonies.

However, one thing you might take a look at:

"When I was a kid, I locked myself out of the house in disgust when Mom wouldn't let me use a spoon to make mud pies with some neighborhood girls."

I didn't know that neighborhood girls were ingredients in mud pies. :o) Take a look at the sentence structure and you will see what I mean.

Good job...Keep writing.
03/04/06
I really like the way you finish - it is powerful.

Glad you've had so much help along the way ... what an ... um ... exciting life!! Phew ... you're keeping the angels busy watching over you, girl!
03/04/06
A well written testimony and lesson all in one. God is good :)
03/05/06
I know that Somebody ... and He knows me, too. Good devotional type read. Made me think back over my own Highs and lows. Good work!