The Official Writing Challenge
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02/27/06
A very miraculous story, and intriguing. I was wondering why God wasn't capitalized? A small letter "g" is usually used for idols, etc. I was fascinated by the story, and it's well written.
03/02/06
Sooooo cool! I've read many stories like this- how exciting to know God is working such wonders around the world- on the mission field and in the midst of persecuted Christians. Thanks for writing this. I'll check out the web site.
03/02/06
Very inspirational! And I love the way you wrote your narrator's voice as if he were speaking his second language. Very authentic and a wonderful read.
03/02/06
Enjoyable, interesting read. :)
03/05/06
Amazing - (don't forget to capitalize God :)
03/05/06
With God giving out stories such as this to tell, none of us should ever suffer writer's block! Great job telling the story through the eyes of the young boy!