The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/06
A seamless transition from memory into the present day, and a very subtle way of depicting her transformation, and the answer to her cry. Skillfully written and moody, very good.
Very good. Kept my attention all the way through. I loved the way you transitioned from the past into the present. Good writing and message.