The Official Writing Challenge
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02/27/06
A wonderful poem on such an important message. A good reminder to us all. And great job on the word choice.
Pat Guy  
02/28/06
This is a Wow! poem. Timely, poignant, inspiring, and a tad convicting. It reminds me of the song, 'If We Are the Body... why aren't His hands reaching?' Great rhythm, easy flow and wonderful words. A joy!
03/02/06
I love the musical metaphor throughout, which is enhanced by the rhythm of the poem. Excellent work!
03/04/06
This needs to be put to music and sung by the church.

EXCELLENT!
03/05/06
Loved it -loved the musical images!!
03/10/06
Lovely flow and message. I felt the same sort of surge as when singing "Onward Christian Soldiers!"

Favorite lines: "Take up the Drum of rugged Strength that cowers not in fear

but accents each advancing beat with Perseverance clear."