The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/06
A wonderful, heartfelt prayer. If you're going to use "thees and thous," keep usage in mind: thou art and thine arm in particular.

I loved your lists beginning with "to..." toward the end--would be worthwhile to have them printed up as a daily reminder. Very nice.
03/04/06
I see this as a beautiful prayer. Lovely.