The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/05
I ilke the idea of "me" rperesenting a village terrorized by the beast of selfishness. I enjoyed the structure and the rythmn of your poem. I am not sure whether many people understand the term "id" as it is very scecialsed vocabulary.
02/23/05
Very ingenious and well written, containing good imagery. The spiritual battle is always underway and we are often unaware. Excellent and poetically perfect!
02/24/05
This poem took some hard work and thought. Our spiritual warfare takes places within doesn't it? thanks for a great entry!
Wonderfully written and thought provoking. A great entry that flowed with rhythm and vivid imagery. God bless you, ladybug Karen
great sharp lines that called for a reading in a bold voice! I found myself battling with the Sonlight and rejoiced with the slaying of self! The ending was dynamite, just a great read.
The warfare between self and centering on Jesus was magnificently captured in your poem. Eclipsing self is sometimes a slow process but the Hero comes to save.
Imaginative and powerful! Love this . . .