The Official Writing Challenge
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I ilke the idea of "me" rperesenting a village terrorized by the beast of selfishness. I enjoyed the structure and the rythmn of your poem. I am not sure whether many people understand the term "id" as it is very scecialsed vocabulary.
Very ingenious and well written, containing good imagery. The spiritual battle is always underway and we are often unaware. Excellent and poetically perfect!
This poem took some hard work and thought. Our spiritual warfare takes places within doesn't it? thanks for a great entry!
Wonderfully written and thought provoking. A great entry that flowed with rhythm and vivid imagery. God bless you, ladybug Karen
great sharp lines that called for a reading in a bold voice! I found myself battling with the Sonlight and rejoiced with the slaying of self! The ending was dynamite, just a great read.
The warfare between self and centering on Jesus was magnificently captured in your poem. Eclipsing self is sometimes a slow process but the Hero comes to save.
Imaginative and powerful! Love this . . .