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I liked this a lot! I almost think it would have been better without the last bit with them going their separate ways; you made your point very well with the three vignettes, and the epilog is redundant. So poignant--and certainly happening in congregations everywhere. A call for us to reach out!
Excellent. A clear message, and simple language that communicates.
Good stroy and good message. Welll done! Top 5 or 10 I think!
I commend this well written article - a true to life commentary on the misconceptions that Christians have of one another's lives, and our inability to open up to each other.

Jeffrey Gante