The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 1854 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
I can't believe no one has yet commnted on this beautiful poem with its alternate rhyming scheme. You have shown how Eve's disobedience lured Adam into disobeying as well. He however was not blameless and left us cold outside.
I agree with Phyllis, this is a wonderful poem, well-written and honest. Others who read this will be bless, whether they can take time to comment or not. Yours in Christ, ladybug Karen
I didn't submit to this challenge and today is the first day I've taken time to read. This is wonderful, but in content and technique! (My past attempts at poetry have been awful and I envy those of you with the gift!)
Oops -- that should say both in content and technique! Trust me -- I'm blushing!
02/25/05
This is wonderful. Beautifully put and you managed to get it all to rhyme too!
02/26/05
WOW! God has truly blessed you with poetry. it is awesome. Godbless.
P.S.-dont let this get to your head, it is God doing this work inside you : )