The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/06
This is fantastic! Excellent work!
02/21/06
Very expressive! Quick jumping from image to image.
A miraculous turn around.
Ooh-rah! I love stories of the defeat of the Enemy. Truly powerful, and uplifting to read.

God bless,

Kevin
So beautifully written! Inspiring with detail and gripping images.
This is my favorite story this week. I've personally been "almost" there. The truth you wrote with, the accuracy, the beauty, the incredible imagery and concise "perfect" words brought some life to this story. This is truth. I hope many others will read this and choose to believe that we can live that victorious Christian life and put an end to the attacks. Awesome job!
ok, besides the spelling mistakes in my previous comment, I didn't mean to put the "some life." Leave out the some!
Robin, good story! Watch the white space, some paragraphs weren't separated. Also, "blooding" looks like it should be "blood". Nice imagery and a great use of the verse from Deut.
04/23/06
Hi Robin.

I'm just preparing all the winning entries for inclusion in the FaithWriters' Anthology for last quarter, and need to get a short bio note from you (written in the third person), to include with our "Meet Our Authors" section. If you are at all unsure what to write, it may be worth checking some of the bio notes at the end of the articles at FaithWriters' Magazine (http://www.faithwritersmagazine.com). Once you have your bio note ready, could you please send it through to me at debporter@breathfreshair.org

Thanks for that. Look forward to hearing from you.

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator and Editor, FaithWriters' Magazine)