The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/06
Lovely powerful writing. One small typo - achieving not acheiving. I was transported to the monastery.
02/21/06
Excellent writing. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
02/24/06
I love this glimpse into another world! Really wonderful writing here.
I love your names. Very "monastic" feel throughout the piece, as well. Good job!
02/27/06
I LOVE historical fiction, and your writing is right up there - this is excellent. After I read it, the images remained burned into my mind for days ... in fact, they're still there.

Congratulations on your win!
02/27/06
Great story telling. A story of "worth" that we know little of today.

brotherdave
02/27/06
Absolutetly amazing! I had to remember to breathe at the end, I kept held my breathe through the entire thing! I can envision the invaders as clear as if they were coming for me! A well-deserved win!
02/27/06
Wow! This was awesome Lisa. I love history too, and this was like being transported back in time.