The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/06
I enjoyed reading this - your 'voice' is excellent, and the movement of the piece is well-done and intriguing. I wish you had room to clarify a few things - I thought all the sons died, but then it's clear that they didn't. It was a bit confusing, but overall, a good read.
02/20/06
Brilliant! The tone, the way you wove history into the mix... excellent... I read it several times to make sure I didn't miss anything.
02/21/06
Amazing that you could pack so many years and emotions into 750 words! Love the ironies and plays on words. Good stuff.
02/21/06
I honestly don't know what to say, except that something has to be said. This really touched me. Will we find out how things went in 2006? Good job.
It really held my interest! Excellent job!