The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/06
I enjoyed reading this - your 'voice' is excellent, and the movement of the piece is well-done and intriguing. I wish you had room to clarify a few things - I thought all the sons died, but then it's clear that they didn't. It was a bit confusing, but overall, a good read.
02/20/06
Brilliant! The tone, the way you wove history into the mix... excellent... I read it several times to make sure I didn't miss anything.
02/21/06
Amazing that you could pack so many years and emotions into 750 words! Love the ironies and plays on words. Good stuff.
02/21/06
I honestly don't know what to say, except that something has to be said. This really touched me. Will we find out how things went in 2006? Good job.
02/23/06
It really held my interest! Excellent job!