The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/05
I love how you described tangibly what it is like when God's spirit illumines something in our lives. You made the 'interior world' seem vivid and alive.
02/23/05
You have put this so well - your arch nemesis - who you were trying to put out of your mind, but who was coming back to haunt you. But your prayers were the only answer. Good writing.
02/23/05
Nice writing. You took the reader slowly through the soul of the character