The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/05
I love how you described tangibly what it is like when God's spirit illumines something in our lives. You made the 'interior world' seem vivid and alive.
02/23/05
You have put this so well - your arch nemesis - who you were trying to put out of your mind, but who was coming back to haunt you. But your prayers were the only answer. Good writing.
Nice writing. You took the reader slowly through the soul of the character