The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/06
This would read easier if seperated into paragraphs. I didn't completely agree with the content but won't debate that here. The tone was a bit "preachy." Some passionate writing though- keep working on it!
I think this is a very good article and I love it. May God bless you for writing it.
Thank you
02/24/06
Devotionals such as this one will grab more readers if you can relate it to specific life issues. Give an example from your life or from the lives of others, or use hypothetical situations--but relate it to "where I am." Excellent study, fine exhortation.